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Napoleon uses his position of power to influence everyone on the farm, Napoleon uses the dogs to get his points across to anyone who questioned his authority, “A tremendous growling from the dogs” this proves to us that Napoleon has full control over everyone on the farm. The purpose of this was to show us how much power Napoleon has over the animals and how it is inescapable. Napoleons is able to influence all the animals on the farm to do what he wants when he wants, this can remind us of people in the real world who had power over us we couldn’t escape from.

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Good strong point being made in this paragraph Carter. Remember to keep bringing it back to the initial question. You need to always come back to how these things caused Napoleon to change. You also have a strong statement, explanation and example but when creating a link to the outside world you need to be specific in your connection. Good start.

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