Rewriting sentences.

The man walked through the mall, he ran into his best friend who was walking the other way. Each of them stopped when they saw each other and began to talk. “How are you?” His friend asked. The man responded “I’m mostly ok”

She stumbled down the tarmac as fast as her legs could carry her.—- The woman bolted down the highway as fast as her legs could take her.—- The girl ran down the street as fast as her legs could take her

Within the sandbox the child sat in play, laughing as the sand ran through her fingers. From the deck, the parents watched curiously at their young daughter as she chomped down on the soil. Their neighbours, behind the fence, watched over into the play area as if the child was their own and wished for it to be true.

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